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Michael Edward's avatar

There is always something ineffably unnerving about knowing that something tragic happened both within your vicinity and at a place that feels like yours. You conveyed that well. I was witness to a girl overdosing in the park I frequent each morning not too long ago, and I still find it hard to describe the mix of emotions it brought up. If you’re interested, I wrote about it here:

https://open.substack.com/pub/thecuriousplatypus/p/violet-street?r=28of53&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=false

Max Umbra's avatar

Thanks for sharing this. (I hadn't read it when you published it; I go through phases of not wanting to read any new Substack posts for a while.) Ineffably unnerving, and relatable, indeed. Interestingly, a few days before the incident I described at the park, I was driving to the same park, also early in the morning, so still dark out, and I saw a motorcycle on its side that appeared to have crashed into a concrete utility pole. I stopped to look for the driver/a body but there wasn't one. I kept an eye out after that, thinking maybe the driver had walked away and potentially dropped somewhere. But nothing. When I left the park the motorcycle was gone.

Michael Edward's avatar

I go through similar phases.

And how strange about the motorbike, weird things afoot.

Jacob Riley's avatar

I read this after seeing (and nodding in agreement with) the note you shared re: not having thought something clearly if you can't express it in plain and clear language. So I especially admired the simplicity and clarity of your prose in this piece, it was very lucid throughout.

Max Umbra's avatar

Thanks for the kind words.